Haiku Friday: Spring and Sprung
Peeking yellow, red
Tulips break the cold, dark, earth
Yet, still I shiver
Tired of winter
sniffling frozen noses
Grey, slow, roll of cloud
Yesterday, one ray
pierced straight through concrete path
I caught a glimpse: spring.
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Tink *~*~* said,
Wrote on April 10, 2009 @ 10:29 am
Don’t worry, spring cannot be kept at bay for much longer – you will be warm again!
Tink *~*~*
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Cathy said,
Wrote on April 10, 2009 @ 11:02 am
that “roll of cloud” line is great!
WW says:Thanks Cathy and welcome to the blog! Hope you’ll be a returning visitor and not *just* ’cause you complimented my writing! Like your blog, too!
Texas Girl said,
Wrote on April 10, 2009 @ 8:23 pm
Happy Easter!
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Gayle said,
Wrote on April 10, 2009 @ 9:27 pm
Spring, please come quickly.
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sunriselover said,
Wrote on April 11, 2009 @ 12:08 pm
you caught the expectant feeling of a coming spring perfectly
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Margaret Emendorf said,
Wrote on April 12, 2009 @ 2:54 pm
What a wonderful way to write about Spring coming. It is my very favorite time of year. Good job
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Mom said,
Wrote on April 12, 2009 @ 3:57 pm
Don’t we all need a good spring!
Webbielady said,
Wrote on April 12, 2009 @ 6:56 pm
Haikus always catch my attention. I mean, you have to put meaning in those words and at the same time count those syllables… I love the style!
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Mel said,
Wrote on April 12, 2009 @ 10:04 pm
Mmmmm… spring. I miss it. I see the blossoms, and occasionally, it’s been warm, but not lately. I can’t wait until it is! Sending warm thoughts your way.
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zorlone said,
Wrote on April 13, 2009 @ 12:30 pm
nicely done!!! i like it!
a series of haiku about spring, almost like a free verse but, each can stand on its own.
Z
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washwords said,
Wrote on April 13, 2009 @ 3:24 pm
Thanks everyone for the haiku love and for sharing your loverly ‘kus, too. It’s 30-something here today. Seriously? Sigh. ML’s going to opening day in a coat and multiple layers. grumble.
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